She was a beautiful girl ,
She was a good girl,
She dreamed ,
She hoped ,
she wished,
She smiled & laughed ,
She said No to every bad thing ,
She Loved ,
Not a man but a life,
Not any life but Good life ,
she cried ,
She can`t change ,
she screamed ,
This is the fact ,
She sank in a bad things ,
She was as a small stone at a big ocean ,
She scared ,
No air to breath ,
No earth to stand ,
No life to live ,
So she died .
She dreamed ,
She hoped ,
she wished,
She smiled & laughed ,
She said No to every bad thing ,
She Loved ,
Not a man but a life,
Not any life but Good life ,
she cried ,
She can`t change ,
she screamed ,
This is the fact ,
She sank in a bad things ,
She was as a small stone at a big ocean ,
She scared ,
No air to breath ,
No earth to stand ,
No life to live ,
So she died .
دى لما كنت عامله نفسى شاعره انجليزيه
(اثناء مرحلة تقوية اللغه)
تحياتى لكم
بقلمى 2024
شروق العتمات
الله الله
مثبت كمان J
شكرا للى ثبت الموضوع جدا
بما انه مثبت
نطوره شويه
هكتب هنا كل محاولات كتابتى باللغه الانجليزيه
ايام محاولة تقوية اللغه
كانت خطوه مفيده
لمحاولة استخدام الكلمات
واللى يحب يشارك ياريت J
يتفضل بكتابة شئ من كتاباته
ونعطيله راينا
J
Not a man but a life,
اعجبتني هالعبارة بآلحيييل 
رائـع كـ بداية لك , ابدعتي ماشاء الله
أستمــري وبأكون متابعه معـك > حتى استفيد منك 
يا عسل 🙂
متابعتك وتقيمك وسام افتخر به
wonderful expression
i like it
but why she died
i wish for her to live and challenge every thing to live
i wait ur expressive words
dont deprive me of them dear
Thanks for your kind words
&
yes her life deserve to try
ISA 🙂
بما ان زى ما انتوا شايفين طبعا
الناس هتموت بعضها علشان انزل
بقيت اشعارى العنجليزيه
فمش هتأخر اكتر من كده
(صراحه الواحد محروج من قلة الردود>>>>>>>>بيدارى احراجه الاخ)
every day I see children in the street
need Love to could live
five children called me my mom
come and take us with you
go and search for who is alone
need Love to could live
five children called me my mom
come and take us with you
go and search for who is alone
again and again we will reach
beach is our goal , it is safe
sail need knowledge to could complete
beat and hurt couldn’t be our weapon
open your heart and your feels
beach is our goal , it is safe
sail need knowledge to could complete
beat and hurt couldn’t be our weapon
open your heart and your feels
peace with your self is the power
flower will be your town
down or high won’t be your goal
tour in your life with someone you Love
above anything you will do
flower will be your town
down or high won’t be your goal
tour in your life with someone you Love
above anything you will do
مخرج
هو مفيش مخرج لان لا يوجد مدخل
ارجو الا اكون اثقلت عليكم
هو مفيش مخرج لان لا يوجد مدخل
ارجو الا اكون اثقلت عليكم
احاول مشاركتكم كل تجاربى
وهذه احدى تجاربى لتحسين اللغه
ارجو الافاده
تحيتى لكم
بقلمى
شروق العتمات
شروق العتمات
شروق اشرقتي على القسم بموضوعك الجميل
كلمات رائعه وفعلا يستحق التقييم والتثبيت والفايف ستارز >>سبقت الرد
go ahead : )
شكرا جداعلى الكلا م ده ,,,بجد اخجلنى كلامك جدا
وشكرا على التشجيع
يارب اكون عند حسن الظن دايما
